初中學業水平考試（The Academic Test for the Junior High School Students），簡稱“中考”，是檢驗初中在校生是否達到初中學業水平的考試；它是初中畢業證書發放的必要條件，考試科目將國家課程方案?， 以下是為大家整理的關于山西中考作文5篇 , 供大家參考選擇。
山西中考作文5篇
山西中考作文篇1
2013年山西中考英語作文
見紅皮書p194英語小作文命題方向
1)do you often do sports?（要求：簡要談談做運動的意義，倡導大家運動健身）how keep healthy
i think it is necessary for us to form some good habits if we want to keep healthy. first of all , we should have the right kind of food that is good for health. remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food . we are also asked to go to bed early and get up early . staying up late at night is bad for our health . what’s more , we are supposed to take exercise more . exercise will keep us active and strong . of course , having pleasant mood is good for our health . we should forget the unhappy thing that happened .
2) let’s help to improve the environment . (要求：結合周邊環境情況，動員大家為保護環境、改善環境效力)
we have only earth . it’s our duty to protect the environment . i think we should keep our schools/city clean and tidy . don’t spit in public and throw litter (rubbish) everywhere . and we should plant trees and flowers around the city . it’s important to recycle paper and water . remember to turn off the shower when we finish washing hands . don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room/classroom . we had better walk or ride bikes to school to keep our streets clean . we must do our best to make our world more and beautiful in the future .
3）the daily food of mine
可以參考1）keep healthy
以講演稿形式：注意格式，此篇文章只作為參考和摘取有用信息 boys and girls:
i’m talking about / here is my advice about how to keep health/fit?today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep. if we keep fitwe must keep taking exercises every day .eat lots of fruit and vegetables .sleep for about 8 hours a night.stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs(毒品) .early to bed early to rise/get up .breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.keep happy every day. that is my advice.i hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.
4) an unforgettable experience of mine
可以參考my school life
8)what i am going to say to my english/math teacher…或i want to thank…(提示：畢業在
即，你有什么向你的老師說……)
i want to thank you, teacher
i want to thank you.you are the one of brightest stars in the sky.i want to thank you,you teach me how to do well in all things.i want to thank you,you give me advice about how to be a top student.thank you mrs xu.when i have trouble,you will give me a helping hand and have a rest with the help of you.my english has improved much.in the word i really want to thank you.
10)come to my hometown for a visit,please.或i visited…旅游和介紹地方
旅游：i visited hainan
hainan island is in the south part of our country. on island hainan, you could enjoy
bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery. you will never forget that.
hai kou city is the capital of hainan province while it is also the biggest city on the island. there, you could either go to visit the flower markets or enjoy the delicious seafood. there, you could find many beautiful beaches. people love walking along the seaside or swimming in the sea. there are many tall coconut palm trees to see. welcome to hainan island! i’m sure you will have a good time there.
my hometown
welcome to my hometown! haimen is my hometown. it is a modern and busy town. it has a long history. there are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. it is very easy to go shopping. you can see green hills, big trees and nice flowers. there are many restaurants in haimen. you can enjoy haimen goat. it tastes very delicious. many visitors come here to enjoy it.
there are many good places to visit. there is a park and a big shopping mall. you can see films in renmin theatre. my school is one of the best schools in my hometown. it is on changjiang road. it is very beautiful. i hope you can come and visit soon.
12)how to save water(time)
how to save time
we have ever heard of “time is money. time is life.” time is very important to everyone. but we can see people waste their time everywhere. they spend much time playing computer games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on. it’s necessary for us to save our valuable time. we have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class. we should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time. if we can make good use of time, we are sure to get more.
how to save water
water is very important to us.without water,people cannot live. but in our daily life, we can see many people waste water. some people do not turn off the tap after using it. some take long showers and others throw away plastic bottles when there is still water inside. to save water, we should always turn off the tap when we are not using it. we can wash our clothes twice a week instead of every day. and we’d better flush the toilets with used water.
the last drop of water could be our tears,so save water,take actions from now on!
13)my school life/a day of mine
passage1:how time flies! my middle school life is coming to an end. i can’t forget the happy time that i’ve spent with my classmates and teachers. at school, i am busy with my studies. i’m interested in english, because my english teacher, miss wang, is kind and helpful.
i like playing basketball and reading books. after class, i join some clubs at school. in this way, i’ve got more knowledge and improved my life. i learn how to face difficulties, and i also learn how to get on well with friends.
my school life is meaningful and colorful. in a word, it is unforgettable, isn’t it?
passage2:以書信形式描述你一天的生活a day of mine（注意格式）
dear jack,
hi,i am li tao, a student of class6,grade 9.my school life is very interesting.
classes begin at 8:00a.m. i have four classes in the morning.in the afternoon,i have two classes.i study chinese,math,english and some other subjets. english is my favorite subjet and i often speak english with my classmates. i also like p.e. and music.but i don’t like math at all. i think it’s difficult and boring.do you like so?
after school, i often play basketball with my classmates.it’s my favorite outdoor activity.sometimes i draw pictures with my good friends in the park.every tuesday and thursday,i go to the school library.do you think my school life is very interesting?
my teachers are very friendly to me.and i like my school life very much. what about you? can you tell me something about your school life?
sincerely,
li tao
14)i want to be a teacher (或a doctor ,an actor etc )或my dream
i want to be an english teacher
i want to be an english teacher when i grow up . firstly , i like english . i want to use it often in my daily life . secondly , i like working with students , and enjoy being asked questions and answering them . thirdly , i’m good at english , so i can teach my students the right way to learn english .
now what i should do is to study hard and get high marks in english teats , and try to practice speaking english as much as possible . only in this way can i realize my dream of being an english teacher one day .
我的夢想是當一名醫生(my dream is doctor)
i am an ordinary person, i have an ordinary dream: is a doctor. because doctor may let these experience personally the human which the indisposition suffers to get rid of the pain. may let the human change the health. at the same time, i believed that, will help others, own also to be able to obtain joyfully. therefore, i hoped future i might be a doctor.
15)everyone needs help/we all need our parents’(friends’/teachers’)help
in our daily life, we are dealing with different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. everyone needs help, i think. and only who are willing to help others will also be helped. one day i saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. she was walking happily.
then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. she ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. i helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. he thanked us over and over. i think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm-hearted person.
附加：how i change (初中三年的變化，外貌、習慣、愛好等)
how i change
my life has changed a lot in the past three years . when i was in grade 7, i was a short and shy girl with long hair . i often listen to music at home . but now i like to make friends and take
part in all kinds of activities . i prefer running with my classmates . so i’m becoming much healthier than before . not only my parents but also my teachers are satisfied with me .
changes in my life
my life has changed a lot in the last few years . i used to ride a bike to school , but now i usually take my mother’s car . i used to watch plays and news on tv , but now i can also watch them on the intemet! there’re much more changes in my life now . i have never been enjoying it like this before!
【篇二：2013年中考英語作文】
2013年中考英語書面表達
(1)
今年一月份，我國政府號召全民“拒絕浪費，文明用餐”，加入“光盤行動”。請根
據下面提示，聯系實際，適當發揮，以“save food and eat healthily”為題，寫一篇80-100詞
的英語短文。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
save food and eat healthily
our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy
our happy life. we middle school students should do something for it.
to save food, we
參考范文
save food and eat healthily shouldn’t waste any of our food. we should eat up all the food. we
shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough to eat. to eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food. it’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. we’d better not eat in small restaurants. the food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. we’d better eat at school or at home if we have time.
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每個人的成長都是一種蛻變的過程，從幼稚走向成熟，從逆境走向成功。請你用英語寫
一篇80詞以上的短文，談談你在成長過程中所經歷的最大的一次蛻變。
內容要求：1.變化前后分別是什么樣子的？
2.促成你轉變的主要原因是什么？
3.你為變化而付出了怎樣的努力？
注意：短文中不允許出現與考生本人相關的真實姓名和校名等信息。
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i used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. now i’d like to say i’ve changed a lot. in fact, all is because of my mother’s diaries.
one day i saw my mother’s diary book by accident while i was looking for my notebook. i was curious and began to read my mother’s diaries. in her diaries, she showed her deep love for me. she also expressed her disappointment when i made mistakes. she said she loved me so much and she believed i could be a good boy. i couldn’t help crying after reading my mother’s diaries.
since that day, i have changed a lot. i work hard and share some housework. i also try to understand my mother’s feelings.
(3)
你國外的朋友paul想了解你們的英語老師，請根據下表提示用英語寫一篇題為“my english teacher alva”的短文。
要求：
1. 題目與開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 介紹必須包括所給要點，但不要逐條譯成英語；
3. 詞數80左右。
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my english teacher – alva
alva, my english teacher, is from england and is about 29 years old. she has blonde hair and she always wears a pair of glasses on her nose.
she is strict with us in our study, so all the students are well-behaved in her class. although she is strict, she can get along well with all the students because she is very kind and patient. whenever we have difficulty in english learning, she will help us to deal with the questions. we all like her lessons very much. that’s because she is very creative. her teaching style is quite different from that of the others. she prepares her lessons well and corrects our homework carefully. in class she always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own.
in a word, i think she is one of the best english teachers i have ever seen. we all love and respect her.
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“an umbrella in the rain, a helpful hand when you’re lost, all are friendship. wherever you are with friends, you won’t be lonely (孤獨的) or helpless.” 請你根據對這兩句話的理解及自己的經歷，談談你對朋友和友誼的看法。可按照下面的提示：
1. 擁有朋友的重要性；
2. 舉例說明你和你朋友之間發生的故事；
3. 你對朋友和友誼的理解。
注意：
1. 應覆蓋所有要點；可適當增加細節，使行文連貫；
2. 詞數不少于80；
3. 參考詞匯：encourage; cherish; important; friendship
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參考范文
as the saying goes, “a true friend is the best possession.” and i do have such friends.
in the dubbing contest last semester, our group faced a big problem. the computer couldn’t play our video, but one of my friends had the film we needed. so she went back home at once to bring it here. as a result, we got second prize.
i think a friend is someone who cares more for you than for himself. a friend is someone who gives you a hand when you’re feeling down. so take good care of your friendships and cherish your best possession.
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初中生活即將結束，同學們一定有很多難忘的回憶，現在請你擷取一兩個片段，以“my unforgettable (難忘的) school life”為題寫一篇短文。
要求：
1. 文中不得出現真實人名和校名等相關信息；
2. 詞數不少于80詞，題目不計入總詞數。
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although i’ve had a busy school life in the past three years, getting along with such amazing classmates has made me the luckiest person in the world.
in one of those unforgettable days, we had a basketball game. during the tough time, i could feel that everyone in my class was so concentrated that our hearts were beating together fast. we brought the players not only encouragement but also some real help and skills. though there were only three people on the front line, i knew it was 39 people fighting side by side and we would never give up. at last, we won the game. with great excitement, all of us jumped around and burst into tears.
there’s no doubt that we’ll always go through hard times together and i’ll never forget the happiness we shared. i love my school life with my lovely class 3.
(6)
現在中學生普遍覺得壓力很大，有人害怕考試，有人不能很好地處理人際關系，還有的覺得父母的期望值過高也對他們造成壓力。你對此怎么看？請就此問題寫一篇英語短文，談談你的做法，與同學們分享經驗。
總詞數：80左右，短文的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. most students in our class are under too much pressure._______________________________________________________________________
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less pressure makes for a better life. thank you!
參考范文
pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. most students in our class are under too much pressure. some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
i used to be under heavy pressure, too. my parents wanted me to be the top student in class. they made me study all day, and even sent me to all kinds of extra classes on weekends.
i had a long talk with my parents. i told them that i had done my best and what they were doing was stressing me. finally, they understood me. as a result, i was released from the burden of heavy pressure.
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午餐是一天中非常重要的一餐，但是有很多同學不愛吃學校的午餐，經常到校外去吃他們所喜歡吃的食物。而這些食物有很多都不利于他們的身體健康。如何讓更多的同學回歸學校的午餐呢？請你寫一篇80字的短文，談談你的看法和建議。
參考詞匯：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
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we know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because they are not keen on the food in school. so they often go out of school to buy something different. but i’m concerned this is bad for their health, as some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.
in my opinion, if our schools want more students to enjoy lunch at school, they should make the food taste nicer, and they should also offer our students a larger choice of food as well.
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最近，你們班就“幸福是什么”進行了一次討論，學生們發表了自己的看法，他們認為：
1. 認真學習是幸福，父母總是關心他們的生活與健康，是幸福
2. 有時當他們做錯了事，周圍的人會幫助他們改正，他們感到幸福。
3. 你同意同學們的看法，你認為當你做??你也會感到幸福。
要求：
①第三要點的內容需用三到四句話展開合理想象，進行適當發揮；
②詞數80左右，開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
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happiness is for everyone. some students think happiness comes from studying hard at their lessons. their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. they feel happy.
some students say when they do something wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. they believe this is happiness.
i agree with them. i love my friends congratulating me when i enjoy success. when i do something kind to others, like congratulate them, i feel happy, too.
when we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.
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根據最近的一則報道，我國中小學生的書包超重現象十分嚴重。小學生書包平均重量為
3.5公斤，而初中生則為5.5公斤。請根據這一現象，按照以下要點寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。文章的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。
要點：
1.簡單描述：學生背著重重的書包去上學??
2.分析原因：課外班、課本、作業、測試??
3.提出建議：減少課本、作業??
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it is reported that students in our country have a problem with their schoolbag weight. most students have very heavy schoolbags. for the average primary school kid, his or her school bag weighs 3.5kg, while an average middle school student’s weighs 5.5kg.
the reason why their schoolbags are so heavy is that their school workload is equally heavy. on top of a large amount of homework, students also have to take a lot of extra classes and study hard for tests. all this work means that the books, test papers and exercise books pile up and make their schoolbags very heavy indeed.
in my opinion, schools and parents should work together to assign students less homework. if so, they’ll finally be able to carry their bags with ease.
(10)
假設你是school kids times雜志的編輯，你收到了一封讀者來信。在信中，一名叫helen的讀者向你訴說了她的煩惱。請你針對她的問題談談你的看法，給她提幾點建議。
dear editor,
my problem is my parents. all of my classmates have mobile phones. they phone each other, surf the internet and play games. i’m always asking my parents for one. but they refuse, time and time again. none of my friends have such terrible parents. i’m so angry that i can’t study hard. do you think i’m right? what shall i do?
helen
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【篇三：山西中考英語作文】
2008viii.基礎寫作 (本題分a、b兩部分；滿分15分)
以下兩題均請勿出現真實的人名和校名。
(a)話題表述：即將初中畢業的你又要展開學習與生活新的一頁，你一定會接觸到更多的同學與朋友。為了與他們更好的溝通與了解，請以cheng dong為名，從外貌、性格、愛好三方面用英語做一自我介紹。字數30-40個詞。（共6分）
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(b)書面表達：
汶川大地震牽動了億萬人民的心，海內外各界人士紛紛伸出援助之手，幫相災區重建家園，真所謂“天災無情人有情”。災區也有像你一樣參加中考的同學，為使他們鼓起更大的學習與生活的勇氣，請你用英文給他們寫一封60詞左右的信，鼓勵他們發憤圖強。（共9分）
提示：lost one’s life in ??， feel sad , be not lonely , be with you for ever(永遠)；cheer up, be brave to face all kinds of difficulties, learn to forget; study hard, make progress, graduate from, try one’s best to , be active in ?? 。
要求：1. 可用所給提示詞語，也可適當發揮。
2. 信件開頭與結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。
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viii.86. 參考范文：
hello, everyone. i’m cheng dong. as you see, i’m very outdoing
and healthy. i like playing basketball. i’m tall and strong. i took so
energetic that others may feel safe when they are together with me. glad to be your friend! thank you!
87. 參考范文：
my dear friends,
i’m very sorry to know the big earthquake took place in your
hometown. maybe many people around you lost their lives in the
earthquake. but please don’t be afraid. you are not lonely. we’ll be with you forever. let’s cheer up! to be brave to face all kinds of difficulties. learn to forget these sad things. study hard from now on and try your best to make much progress in your study and life. and we are sure that our future will be more beautiful.
2009Ⅷ.基礎寫作 (本題分a、b兩部分；共15分)
(a)話題表述：關愛生命，擁抱健康。請從飲食、運動兩方面，談談你是怎樣保持健康的。（30―40詞 滿分5分）
(b)書面表達：生活多姿多彩，變化無處不在。請你寫下身邊（如家庭、學校、家鄉等）的變化，見證發展。（60詞左右滿分10分）
要求：1. 補全題目，題目不計入總詞數。
2. 參考詞匯： in the past， now， great( ly )， improve， be proud of 。
參考范文：
i’m a sunny girl with a lovely name “happy baby” which is given by my classmates fruits
and vegetables are my favorite. i like sports and often do them. i’ll keep this healthy lifestyle as long as i can.
82. 參考范文：
changes in my my life has changed a lot in the last few years. i used to ride a bike to school, but now i
usually take my mother’s car. i used to watch plays and news on tv, now i can also watch them on the internet! there are much more changes in my life now. i have never been enjoying it like this before!
2010
ix. a) after the exam, i really want to travel to dalian. i think dalian is a very beautiful city. i like the sea there. i can swim in the real sea. it will make me relax.also i can lie on the beach and enjoy the sunshine.
how happy i will be!
b) you are an outgoing boy. there’s always a smile on your face and
everybody likes to make friends with you. we used to play baskerball on the playground. sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. i always laughed a lot when i was with you. at this very moment i’m saying goodbye to you, i just want to give you my best wishes;
i hope you are happy and healthy forever.
i hope you are successful in the future.
2011Ⅸ書面表達（共15分)
某校進行了“你最喜歡的課堂學習方式”的調查。結果表明，小組合作學習的方式受到了同學們的歡迎。請你寫一篇有關小組合作學習的短文，內容須包含以下三個方而：1小組合作學習的好處；
2讓你感受深刻的一次小組合作學習的經歷；
3小組合作學習的方式給你帶來的收獲。
要求：1詞敦80詞左右。已給出的句子不計人總詞數；
one possible version :studying in groups is becoming more and more popular.
書面表達：
one possible version:
studying in groups is becoming more and more popular. it has many advantages. for
example, we can not only save time but also encourage each other when we study in groups.
i still remember when i was in grade 8, my physics was very poor. i had a really hard time with it. once in class, i studied with some classmates together. i was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. i didn’t feel stressed out at all. at last, i finished my homework by myself for the first time. how excited i was!
because of studying in groups, i am not worried about physic ay more. i get more confidence with my classmates’ help. it also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.
2012
山西中考作文篇2
山西中考滿分作文600字
山西中考滿分作文600字一
雀躍載歌載舞的時候，我不禁回頭又一次望向廚房。小乙，那就是你所謂的友情;可就在我們嘆服的當兒，教官卻給我們來了個下馬威――站軍姿40分鐘。父親不時的眨眼。
夜闌人靜時，寂寂無人處，總有一個聲音在低語：橋是什么？它僅僅是一條放大的板凳嗎？我知道這是不安分的心靈在叩問，是愛幻想的大腦在高速旋轉。在這個多元的世界里，萬物皆相似，在思索了半天后，潺潺的心靈之水送來了答案：水也是橋。
水是思鄉之橋，美麗的昭君出嫁時，陪嫁的除了金銀珠寶外，最不可缺的就是那香溪溪水，是那條長溪給了她落雁的容貌和如水的柔情與堅毅。幾次伴著月夜環佩空歸，對著遠方暗自落淚，遠嫁的姑姑再也不能隨侍女一起到溪邊浣紗，梳洗那如云的長發，“大漠孤煙直，長河落日圓”，塞外沒有親似骨肉的香溪和親如伙伴的侍女，她對著那瓶溪水暗自神傷，在溪水架成的思鄉之橋上失神、落淚。
水是友情之橋，那潭深千尺的桃花潭水依舊如故嗎？李白與汪倫的友情隨之沉積至今，忘不了那仍依惜別的友人深情的目光和一份僅存心底而無法用語言表達的默契，還有什么不快嗎？舉杯與朋友暢飲，對影成三人獨酌，讓人神傷，遠在天涯斷腸人的自飲讓人心碎，這友情之橋讓“海內存知己，天涯若比鄰”成為現實。即使遠隔千山萬水，也有人為你祝福、祈禱，潭水依然如故，友情越積越深，一葉素箋為你寄去相思，一封飛鴻讓我們永記潭水般深厚的友情。
山西中考滿分作文600字二
天，灰蒙蒙的，鉛灰色的云籠在頭頂，給人以沉悶、壓抑，乃至窒息的感覺，山西省中考滿分作文：小白楊，太棒了！。
我呆呆地坐在小河邊，暗自垂淚，憤懣、凄苦、悲涼，多種傷感時時襲攏著我的心。我流淚幽泣，時而憤怒地抓起地上的石子向遠處撇去……
想想考試的不理想，喉間又涌上了幾絲痛楚的哽咽。
小河靜靜地流，毫不懈怠。條條河流歸大海，可我的歸宿在哪里？
愣愣地望著小河，忽然有一株樹的倒影映入眼簾。抬頭看，那株小白楊，筆直的干，筆直的枝，這，不是茅老先生筆下的“英勇斗士”的形象嗎？
風拂楊葉，嘩嘩作響。白楊，你是在可憐我？你是在安慰我？還是在鼓勵我？
夜間，暴雨驟至，電閃雷鳴，狂風大作。
次日清晨，許多人跑向村北小河。我也走過去，見那株白楊昨夜被狂風吹折，倒在小河中。
有個青年走到樹旁，看了看說：“扶起它，興許還能活。”于是七手八腳地把它扶起。我摸著斷痕，那兒有幾點粘液。白楊啊，這可是你的淚？
過了幾天，我再去小河邊，那株白楊葉片已經微黃，有幾片已飄落下來。多可憐的白楊樹！
從此，我不再去河邊——我不愿，也不忍看到白楊死去的慘景。 開學之期將至，家中決定讓我復習。我背起行李，走在村邊小路上。將近小河，忍不住內心某些微妙感覺的驅使，我抬起頭，把目光移向那株白楊。那白楊竟奇跡般地活了下來，依然是筆直的干和枝，依然是那么挺拔聳立。
那初抽的新葉，似乎比以前更綠更亮。樹干上還帶著傷痕，然而正是這傷痕，明白地顯示它不屈不撓的氣質！
我緊緊地盯著它，細細地打量它，深深地體會它。白楊啊，你莫不是想送我一份生活的啟迪？你莫不是想告訴我頑強奮斗可以戰勝一切困難？你莫不是在鼓勵我要努力奮斗下去？
擦干了眼淚，眼前一片光明。今后的路，我要好好地走下去…… 在我心中有一株非常非常棒的白楊，一株緊韌、挺拔、不屈不撓的白楊！
山西中考滿分作文600字三
俄國偉大作家高爾基曾經說過：“我撲在書上，就像饑餓的人撲在面包上。”可見，書的魔力是多麼巨大啊！
小的時候，我雖然愛讀書，但是我經常是一目十行、囫圇吞棗的讀書，一點也不愛作筆記，寫摘抄和讀后感，拿到新書也沒有欣喜若狂的感覺。
然而有一次，卻讓我改變了對書籍的態度。
一天，爸爸和我去逛書店。爸爸給我買了一本書，名叫《雷鋒的故事》。回到家我便迫不及待的讀了起來。這本書把我深深的吸引了，我對這本書愛不釋手，一有空閑時間我就端起書來認真的品味。它讓我覺的全世界的書都那麼好看。在這本書里，我十分同情雷鋒。家庭的不幸在雷鋒小時侯就降臨到他的頭上。在雷鋒七歲時，他便成了孤兒，經常過著吃了上頓沒下頓的生活，是鄰居們把雷鋒拉扯大的。當新中國成立了，打算雷鋒去當解放軍。長大以后，雷鋒參軍了，他處處為別人著想。最后，雷鋒犧牲了，大家都十分傷心。看著看者，我情不自禁的為失去一個毛主席的好戰士、人民的好公仆感到惋惜。
讀了這本書，讓我愛上了讀書。我又相繼讀了《上下五千年》，讓我穿梭于時光隧道，了解了人類上下五千年的文明史。我又讀了英國作家海倫凱勒的《假如給我三天光明》，讓我看到了一個生活在盲聾啞世界里的人怎樣與命運作斗爭的……
讀了許多書籍之后，我發現我的視野開闊了，懂得了各種知識，我漸漸的離不開書了。在這個知識時代里，書是不可缺少的。同學們，讓我們都愛上讀書吧！
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山西中考作文篇3
中考英語作文總結
一、IX. 書面表達（共15分）
二、共同點：1.圖文式 2.有提示詞 3.結合親身經歷 詞左右
三、話題： 11-15 三點式 圍繞英語學習方法與方式
16 正反方選其一 圍繞幫助別人是否期待回報；
17 正反方選其一 如何看待考試成績
四、體裁： 15 電子郵件 其他是短文或報告
2011年山西省中考英語作文及范文
某校進行了“你最喜歡的課堂學習方式”的調查。結果表明，小組合作學習的方式受到了同學們的歡迎。請你寫一篇有關小組合作學習的短文，內容須包含以下三個方面：
1. 小組合作學習的好處；
2. 讓你感受深刻的一次小組合作學習的經歷；
3. 小組合作學習的方式給你帶來的收獲。
范文：
Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages. For example, we can not only save time but also encourage each other when we study in groups.
I still remember when I was in Grade 8,my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn’t feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was!
Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates’ help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.
2012年山西省中考英語作文及范文
Ⅸ.書面表達（共15分）
66.現在，社會上補習機構火爆，在各種媒體上，我們經常可以看到“名師名校”、“個性化教學”、“終級押題”、“秒殺中考”等廣告詞。你相信這樣的宣傳嗎為此，你所在的學習小組針對這一社會現象，圍繞“課余時間我們應該更多地去做什么才能夠得到全面的發展”展開了討論．最終大家形成了以下的觀點：
請你根據同學們的上述觀點，并結合自己的親身體驗，就此問題陳述自己的看法，內容必須包含以下要點：
1. Would you like to take after-school classes Why or why not (Please give 3 reasons.)
2. What would you like to do in your spare time
3. Please tell us one of your stories of this kind of experience.
范文：
It seems that many students go to take after-school classes, but it is just a waste of time and money. I used to go to different kinds of these classes, too. But later I realized I couldn"t do that any more. I began to spend more time reading, doing sports and taking some social activities. Meanwhile, I didn"t fall behind others in study.
I prefer to have time to enjoy the nature. It"s a wise way to know about the world. So I often put my spare time to good use by watching animals, plants, rocks .around my city. I still remember that day I went to the Forest Park this spring! And I found a few plants appearing in my biology books. It offered me an opportunity to deepen my understanding of my textbooks.
Learning by using is a real practice. I have benefited a lot from it. Now I am becoming more creative and confident than those who are always involved in taking after-school classes.
2013年山西省中考英語作文及范文
Ⅸ.書面表達（共15分）
學生綜合素質評價的方式多種多樣，同伴互評是其中較為有效的方式之一, 它可以讓學生不斷體驗成長和學習過程中的進步，并正確認識自我, 保持自信。
某班一個小組正在進行階段性同伴互評活動，如果你是該組組長， 請結合本組討論情況，為本組某位同學寫一份分激勵性評價報告，內容須包含以下要點：
the skill/the advantage/the personal quality the student has
one thing the student did
some advice for the student
范文：
Han Mei is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone. She is also talented in performing. What’s the most important, she is warm-hearted.
Once she knew a girl in her neighborhood had so serious an illness that a large amount of money was needed. She put forward a suggestion calling on all the kids to give away pocket money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money. When the girl and her parents got the money, they were really moved.
Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades.
2014年山西省中考英語作文及范文
Ⅸ.書面表達（共15分）
學習方法、自我反思、合作交流、同伴互評是學習過程中幾個重要的方面，其中，有效的學習方法能使你的學習境界大開，讓學習成為一種享受。
在你初中三年的學習過程中，你一定會有一些好的學習方法與你的同伴分享，請按以下要求寫一篇短文，內容須包含以下要點：
your good learning method(s)
an experience that you helped your partners
your thoughts and feelings
范文：
Good learners must have good ways. Discussing in a group really helps me have a better understanding of what I’ve learned. It broadens our mind and allows us more chances to express our thoughts.
Shy and nervous, my classmate Jeff used to hide himself behind books. Answering questions in public was quite a difficult job for him. Once our math teacher asked us to solve a difficult problem. I encouraged Jeff to discuss his idea with us and we found his way was so creative. Then we advised him to write his answer on the blackboard and explain it to us .Believe it or not, he did it and we saw his great improvement after that.
Discussing in a group not only makes me enjoy the happiness of being a good learner but also deepens the friendship between Jeff and me. Knowledge comes from communicating and questioning. By discussing, we learn more wisely and better.
2015年山西省中考英語作文及范文
Ⅸ.書面表達（共15分）
某校開展“我是課堂小主人”建議征集活動，各班就此展開討論，同學們紛紛發言：“我希望能有足夠的自主學習時間……”“我喜歡的課堂是每個人都有一臺筆記本電腦，方便上網查詢……”“課上我們能自由地討論，充分展示我們的學習成果……”等等。請你結合同學們討論的結果，給校長以電子郵件的形式寫一封信，建議什么樣的課堂形式更為同學們喜愛，也更有利于同學們未來的發展。內容必須包括以下要點:
what is your favorite class like
please tell us an unforgettable experience you’ve had in your class。
please give at least two suggest
Dear Mr. Li,
My favorite class is an open and free class where I can learn by myself and discuss in groups, which is good for my development, I think.
I still remember an unforgettable experience in my maths class. Several days ago I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class, but they were too hard for me to work them out．So I had to ask my classmates for help。After a considerable discussion，we solved the problems in our group. How excited I was!
Having such a great experience, I want to give two suggestions．Firstly，please don"t teach us too much in class. We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class．Secondly，please provide us with some laptops if possible，so we can surf the Internet easily. No doubt, we need an open and free class，you see.
That"s all. Thank you.
Best wishes，
Zhang Hua
2016年山西省中考英語作文及范文
Ⅺ．書面表達（15分）
向他人表達善意并幫助他人體現了一個人良好的品格．當你向被人表達善意并給他人提供幫助時，你希望得到回報（repay）嗎針對這一話題，九年級六班的同學們展開了辯論．
假設你是正方或反方的一員，請圍繞你的觀點，結合自己的親身經歷，說出2至3條理由來說服同學們（只需選擇一方觀點表達即可）．
When I show kindness and help others，I never expect them to repay me． In my view，helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happiness．On the other hand，everyone may get into trouble and need help，too．
Several days ago，while I was having a walk in the park，I found a little boy crying. Then I asked him what was the matter，and he told me he couldn"t find his mom．Luckily，he remembered his mother"s phone number．So I called her immediately．Ten minutes later，the boy saw his mom and became excited．His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift，but I refused． At that time，I felt quite happy because I did something really good．
All in all，the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay．If you wanted repay，a "Thanks" would be enough．
2017年山西省中考英語作文及范文
Ⅺ.書面表達（共15分）
在我們成長的過程中，有過各種各樣的經歷，其中，“考試”也是一種經歷，“成績”更是一直“伴隨”著我們。為使同學們學會客觀、理性地看待問題，九年級三班以“考試成績重要嗎，它是否等同于實際能力”為題展開了辯論。
假設你是正方或反方的員（只需選擇一方），請圍繞你的觀點，結合親身經歷來說服同學們。
要求：1.詞數不少于80詞；2.提示詞正、反方均可使用，僅供參考；
I don’t think grades are important. Students have different abilities and some of them can’t be measured by grades, such as creativity, abilities to communicate and act.
To start with, I wasn’t good at English and seldom got high scores on the exams. But one day, my teacher encouraged me to perform in an English play because of my good pronunciation and lively expressions. To perform well, I studied my lines many times and even dressed up like the character. While we were performing, I could hear my classmates cheering. How excited! Later, my teacher praised me for my wonderful acting and this made me more confident and interested in English.
All in all, grades can be a way to measure students’ achievements in schoolwork. However, different interests and abilities can make a student a full man.
2018 書面表達（15分）
某校計劃在今年暑期開展社會實踐活動。為使同學們更好地了解自己的意向，合理地規劃自己的時間，學校對 某年級 100 人進行了抽樣調查，下圖是相關活動的統計結果。其中，計劃參加社區志愿者活動的人數占 66%，參加 庭院拍賣的人數占 10%。
請你用兩段話寫一篇短文，第一段簡要說明圖表內容，第二段從圖表中選出一項你感興趣的活動項目，制定相 應的計劃，并說明理由。
要求：1. 詞數不少于 80 詞；2. 首句不計入總詞數；3. 不得出現真實的人名、校名。
注：1. 詞數少于 80 詞的，從總分中扣去 1 分。
2. 如書寫較差，以致影響理解的，可扣去 1 分。
A school did a survey among 100 students about their plans for social practice activities during the summer vacation. Here are the results. Sixty-six students want to do community volunteer work. Twenty-four percent are going to learn a life skill. And only one tenth are interested in having a yard sale. In my view, it"s good to do community volunteer work.
Doing community volunteer work is one of the best ways to develop my abilities to communicate and cooperate. The community is a lot like a big family of different people. First, I need to make a group of volunteers by talking with the teenagers. Then we"re going to work out different plans based on old people"s needs. We can also organize some outdoor activities for the kids and hand out advertisements to better our environment. They all need us to communicate and work well with others. Now, I"m already looking forward to the coming vacation.
山西中考作文篇4
山西中考滿分精選作文3篇 滿分精選作文，特指在重點初中學業考試和高中中學階段招生考試（中考）、普通高校招生考試（高考）中語文考試試卷精選作文部分獲得滿分的文章。每年6月，高考精選作文命習題和滿分文是全社會關注的焦點與議習題。
山西中考滿分精選作文范文格式1：淺笑的魅力 淺笑，如春雨一般涼爽，如彩虹一般絢爛，像春花一樣心愛，像冬雪給一驚喜。
淺笑，就像它的字眼兒一樣，著實令人喜歡。當你感到無助和寂寞時，意外的收獲一份淺笑，你會覺察世間的溫情無處不在;當你陷入窘境，需要理解和支持時，一份淺笑就是一份特棒的禮物。收獲淺笑是幸福，贈人淺笑同樣也是幸福，當每一次淺笑在你的臉上綻開時，你會感到分外的輕松，愉悅，正所謂贈人玫瑰，手有余香。
生活中的淺笑太多了，然而最特殊的就是母親的淺笑，這是任何笑容都無法比擬的，它包含了母親對女兒純潔無私的愛，受傷時，這淺笑會給我無限的關心，抹去我的傷痛，脆弱時，它又給我信念，使我堅強，讓我信心百倍的面對生活。無論何時，母親的淺笑都是我心中一抹永遠的陽光。
其實，只要用心發現，生活中處處都有淺笑，淺笑的內涵也因此多了起來，課堂上，教師的淺笑是對學生的鼓勵和表彰，是教書育人的一種快慰，打谷場上，農民的淺笑是最絢爛的，是豐收的喜悅，也是對來年的希望;交際中，淺笑就是禮貌，是對對方的理解和尊敬。淺笑就是生活的五彩屏上最亮的色彩。
晨練中遇到過這樣一次淺笑。早晨我在林陰路上跑步，遇見一個小女孩，也許興趣相投我倆交談起來，說話間，她的小臉總是彌漫著一朵絢爛的淺笑，我問她為什么，她的答復很簡單：“教師說了，淺笑是給人的最好禮物。”是啊，我怎么沒有想到，為什么每次面對別人時，不能送一份淺笑呢？于是回家路上，每遇到晨練的老人，我都向他們投以熱情的淺笑，我發現每個人都送我一份同樣的淺笑，原來一份淺笑會帶來無數的歡樂。
假如你很苦惱，我愿意送你一份淺笑，抹去你的憂傷，帶給你歡樂，假如你遭受了挫折，人愿意送你淺笑，給你信心和勇氣。
告別了苦惱和挫折，朋友，笑一笑吧，把淺笑送給別人，迎接你的會是無數張笑臉，這也就是淺笑的美麗所在。
山西中考滿分精選作文范文格式2：記憶中的風景 日子總是像從指尖渡過的細紗，在不經意間悄然滑落。那些歡樂和憂愁在似水流年的蕩滌下隨波輕輕地逝去。嘿時光呀，你為何走得這么快，記憶中殘留的風景，卻在一霎時成為心中定格的永恒……
何時你的身影不再高大？何時你變得如此虛弱？記憶中的你是如此的明朗，粗拙的大手曾把我高高的舉起，黝黑的臉上一雙小眼睛炯炯有神，童年的時光一直在你身邊，你對我的疼愛讓我曾一度釋懷。小小的我緊緊跟在你的身后，聽你和其他老人談笑自若，用手摸摸我的頭，滿眼的寵溺。
何時你的身影變得佝僂？何時你的眼睛不再有神？記憶中的你是多么的能干，我曾一度驚訝你是怎樣把一袋大米扛到肩上，然后還要走那么長一段路背到家里，卸下肩上的米袋，看不見你有絲毫埋怨，只有你額頭上亮晶晶的汗珠閃著熠熠的光輝。
幼年的時光或許有些淡忘，但你在我心中留下的更是成長的重要一課。和妹妹吵架時，我坐在一邊氣得直哭，是你在一旁絮絮說道“忍受，忍受，一分忍受一分福。”，又是你在我考試失敗時，平淡說道“只要用心就行了!”
奶奶的離去，也不曾見你有絲毫傷心。反倒安慰起了我們，我很難想象你心中承載著怎樣巨大的痛苦。可如今的你，怎么臉色愈加憔悴，脊背愈發彎曲，經常見你一個人坐在桌旁默默地發愣，總是讓我有多心酸，你也老了嗎？時光，慢些吧!
落葉在空中盤旋，譜寫著一曲感恩的樂章，那是大樹對滋養它大地的感恩;白云在蔚藍的天空中飄蕩，繪畫著那一幅幅感人的畫面，那是白云對哺育它的藍天的感恩。記憶中殘留的風景，讓我也不覺懂得了愛你。這一次，我一定會緊緊攙住你的胳膊，讓你的身影不再落寞。
樹欲靜而風不止，子欲養而親不在。
山西中考滿分精選作文范文格式3：經歷過，我懂了 從前，我一直認為做飯是一件既輕松，又好玩，還沒技術含量的事情。所以，我媽媽在我全天在家時負責我的一日三餐時，我也毫不知情那美味的佳肴背后媽媽的付出。
我一直認為做飯是一件既輕松，又好玩，還沒技術含量的事情。所以，媽媽負責我的一日三餐，我也毫不知情那美味佳肴背后的付出。
隨著媽媽一日比一日犀利的高超廚藝，她做的飯越來越好吃了。終于有一天，我開始好奇：咦？媽媽是怎么做出來那么好吃的飯呢？于是，隨著我的好奇心，我很想試下自己下廚做飯。我把這想法告訴媽媽后，她說：“好呀，難得你那么主動。”我非常快樂。
有一天，我開始好奇：咦？媽媽是怎么做出來那么好吃的飯呢？做飯的經歷一定很好玩吧，我也想嘗試一下。我把這想法告訴媽媽后，媽媽說：“好呀，難得你這么主動。”
首先，媽媽先要自己示范一下。她先說：“我將要做土豆絲炒青椒這道菜。”然后，她先拿出削皮刀消掉土豆皮，接著把它放在面板上，用菜刀從邊緣開始細致地切起來，不一會，就熟練地把土豆切成了絲兒。接著，再挫洗青椒，并把青椒分成一半，把其中一半切成絲。都切完后，把這些放到了已經倒了少許的油的鍋里。然后點起了火，然后馬上拿鏟子炒起來。站在旁邊的我凝視著媽媽，覺得媽媽炒菜好“酷”。鏟子不停地翻動著菜，不一會，媽媽放了一些生抽和雞汁，還撒了鹽，然后接著拿鏟子炒著菜。不一會，香撲撲的土豆絲炒青椒就做好了。
我要做土豆絲炒青椒，媽媽很贊成。不過，媽媽說她得先示范，我再做。我欣然同意。
媽媽把洗好了的土豆放在面板上，用菜刀從邊緣處開始細致地切起來。不一會兒，媽媽就將兩個嫩黃嫩黃的土豆蛋變成了一小堆土豆絲兒。絲兒，又細又薄，真是好看。接著，媽媽又迅速完成了切青椒，準備佐料，開火，放油的工作。開炒了，鏟子不停地翻動著，媽媽一會兒放入生抽，一會兒撒入少許鹽，動作沉著有致。“媽媽炒菜時好‘酷’啊!”我在旁邊靜靜地觀察著，第一次覺得炒菜竟也有如此的美感!就在我愣神的功夫，香噴噴的青椒土豆絲已經出鍋了。
接下來，該輪到我了。
我雖然有點緊張可是自信還是很充足。我首先拿出削皮刀吃力地消起土豆皮。在消的過程中，不是土豆沒拿住掉入池中，就是消掉很多果肉。馬草率虎地消完后開始切青椒。青椒很滑，所以，所以，我差點就切到手。這時媽媽站在旁邊正在鼓勵我。然后，我開始往生鍋里倒醬油，然后，放菜進去。火點了半天才起火。拿起鏟子不自然地翻動菜，由于我力氣過大，鏟壞了好多土豆絲。這時，我感到手格外酸痛。媽媽最終還是幫我炒完了這道菜。
我雖然有點緊張可是自信還是有的。我首先拿起削皮刀消起土豆皮。可是，不是土豆沒拿住掉入池中，就是消掉很多果肉。媽媽刀起皮落的瀟灑在我這兒蕩然無存，只剩下手忙腳亂了。馬草率虎地消完后開始切青椒。青椒很滑，我差點就切到手上。站在旁邊的媽媽一直鼓勵我，“做的不錯，再耐心點!”。終于到了開炒時刻，我拿起鏟子翻動鍋里的菜，由于我力氣過大，鏟壞了好多土豆絲。這時，我感到手格外酸痛。最終，還是媽媽幫我炒完了這道菜。
這道菜我在做時我領會到了做飯的其實不是那么容易。想到媽媽忍著酸疼，冒著劃破手的風險給我做了無數頓飯，我的眼睛不禁濕潤起來。
經歷了這件事后，我懂了。這件事發生后到今天，我很愿意幫媽媽做飯。
第一次炒菜雖然笨手笨腳，但這次經歷卻讓我懂了媽媽做飯的不容易，懂了老媽爐火純青廚藝的背后是無數次的腰酸與背痛!想到這里我的眼睛不禁濕潤起來。
山西中考作文篇5
2019年山西中考滿分作文：鄉關何處
春節拜新年，端午賽龍舟，中秋賞明月……一個個傳統節日，蕩漾著兩千年不曾間斷的精神漣漪，連系著泱泱華夏的繁衍生息，演繹著中華民族的文明。
請任選一個傳統節日，自擬題目，結合生活經歷，寫一篇不少于字的作文。
要求：。
作文題目中必須包含我國一個民族傳統節日，如春節、元宵、清明、端午、中秋、臘八等等；。
敘事感情真摯、樸實、自然；。
文體不限(詩歌除外)；。
避開真實的人名、校名和地名；。
書寫分。
(分)解讀從題目命制來看，今年的作文題與年一脈相承。
年的的魅力或者魅力的半命題作文，關注的是對魅力一詞的精準理解，年的我書的半命題作文，關注的是對我與書之間的學習生活，到了年發生變革，延續多年的半命題作文改為材料作文，以材料為依托，以材料為引導，年選取曾參與的某一次語文活動為考察重點，而今年則繼續與山西高考接軌，將材料作文作為作文能力考察的手段，是為穩。
從寫作內容上看，今年的作文更側重于生活實際的考察。
年的我書的半命題作文，關注的是對我與書之間的學習生活，年的曾參與的某一次語文活動的材料作文，雖然在命題上發生變化，但依舊把側重點放在了學生的學習生活上，可今年的作文題明白了然地直指學生的日常生活來，讓給學生沒有畏懼感、疏離感，而是有親近感、熟悉感，是為變。
審題關鍵點：給定的傳統節日的選材范圍，以文化為立意點，自擬題目，引導學生書寫自己的生活經歷。
命題的立意點在于引導我們關注日常生活的同時，能積極地傳承傳統文化，發現傳統節日的內在魅力。
我們在這里提醒考生，要想寫好一個傳統節日，就要從以下方面深入思考：。
審題。
要想寫好一篇文章，審題是至關重要的。
要學會從字里行間捕捉有用的信息，明確寫作的范圍和內容。
該作文的核心詞匯是傳統節日，那么我們所知道的情人節圣誕節等就不符合題意要求。
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結構和語言。
文章的結構力求有獨特的開頭和結尾，詳略得當，全文渾然一體；在語言上則要能恰當地使用詞匯，真實而有文采地敘說故事，流暢生動地表達感受，善于運用多種修辭手法，努力做到有創意地表達。
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立意。
選取某一個傳統文化節日，力求做到新穎，使它能在萬馬過獨木橋中脫穎而出。
關于傳統節日的敘說，可以選擇不同的立意。
我們可以用記敘文的形式敘說春節、元宵節、清明節、寒食節、端午節、乞巧節、中元節、中秋節、重陽節等某一個中國的傳統節日里發生的有趣故事，從微觀層面進行細細研磨；也可以用散文的形式娓娓道來某一個傳統節日里的歷史淵源與人文素養，從宏觀層面追溯千年歷史。
誤區本題目容易出現的審題誤區主要有以下幾個方面：。
脫離中國傳統節日而獨立成文。
沒有緊扣中國則描寫情人節感恩節圣誕節等西方節日，沒有緊扣傳統節日則描寫傳統文化，寫詩詞、寫儒道、寫藝術等，將題目內容擴大，導致游離文題之外。
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狹義地理解傳統節日，缺少升華的提煉。
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傳統節日寫得不充分，很多人都會單純地敘說在某個節日里發生的事情，而忽略了對這個節日的感受與思考；局限于對事件的描述，而缺少傳統節日內涵的認識，寫不出獨特的體會，流于千人一面。
范文鄉關何處街上空空蕩蕩地，孤零零的灰磚一路延伸著，輕輕踏下去，分明響起了孤單的抱怨，這是春節前的倫敦。
一點也沒有中國的那種感覺，照常過下去，但只感覺丟了什么。
兩邊的商店都開著，買東西不必擔心有人瘋狂的搶購，車站人也很少，不像中國那樣擁擠。
人也很有禮貌，說話很輕，可是卻不知為什么，懷念那擁擠的搶購，瘋狂的春運，大聲的談笑。
路的右邊突然閃過一幢小紅樓，遠遠就看見門口掛著大大的紅燈籠，下面還掛著一對中國結，氤氳開幾分暖暖的笑意。
一問，是中國餐館。
才推開門，一陣熟悉的香氣便飄來，很舒服地呼吸著，對英國菜不敏感的胃也松弛了下來。
不知為何有種滿足，很微小，不像看白金漢宮那樣嚴肅，不像看夕陽沉泡的大本鐘那樣浪漫，只是很尋常、很普通的感動。
一聲輕輕的漢語招呼：有人嗎？立刻跑出兩三個人來。
見到黃皮膚、黑頭發，輕輕地笑了。
安頓好后立刻上菜。
你吃的時候他就坐在旁邊。
話匣子一旦打開，便像洪水般不可阻擋。
突然，店主嘆了口氣，說他回不去了。
問他從哪兒來，說是臺灣，祖籍山東。
一直很很想回去，回到家鄉，回到童年。
眼里，好像還蕩漾著中國紅。
突然明白了春運時人們苦苦地等待。
鄉關何處？這是中國人的根，春節也因此而感動。
走出去，輕輕地看看中國結，便徘徊開每個中國人都有的鄉土情結。
過了幾天，又踏上了中國的土地，穿過喧鬧的大街小巷，踏過鋪滿炮屑的土地，笑了。
鄉關何處？春節，是中國人無以釋懷、久久難忘的根。
解讀這篇文章最大的亮點就是感情真摯，字里行間充滿濃濃的情。
一開篇便是獨在異國他鄉的落寞、孤獨；一個閃字，便把讀者帶入一個充滿溫情的小飯館，幾番寒暄，心中已滿是感動；因店主是臺灣人，祖籍山東，筆鋒一轉，鄉關何處的惆悵便蕩漾開來。
清新的文字流淌在讀者心間，韻味悠長，感慨無限。
